Yes, I definitely do need to outline a little bit. Freestreaming the words out of my head leads to slow word rates and difficulty going forwards.
Sigh.
Starting line of this block:
“And still color-coordinate everything? On the contrary, she cares about her image very much.” He looked behind at the little blue-white mop of high-pitched terror. “Even…the dog…is coordinated. Even the dog, by the Lord Harry.”
Ending line:
“Why indeed,” I said.
On the upside, my chapters are now consistently 4000 words and not 3000.
Graph! (Haven’t done this in a while….)
You can’t always get what you want….
But when you try, sometimes….